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Revenge of the King of BreandyhinerPublished: Sun, 01 Jan 2006 09:00:00 -0500 Revenge of the King of Breandyhiner
"Sir, its time for you to head down now. Said the lady at the door.
I will be down in a second. Said John.
I will let them know. Said the lady.
Hi,
my name is John Wilson and this is my story. It all started in a place
called Ereberlandil. Now the city of Lonomage was attacked. This was
the capital city at that time, although the King Wilson did not live
there, it was still the main market place. Now my name is John, John
Wilson to be exact, yes, it is true; I am the kings son. I was with my
mom in the capital when it was attacked by a man named Sir Hemmer. He
was my dads chief knight in his army, but that was just not enough for
him even though he had his own private army of about 100 people and his
own private castle bigger than the Kings castle.
Now Sir Hemmer had in secret made his army even bigger than the Kings army and he ended up coming through and killing everyone in the Kingdom that would not proclaim him as king. Now this obviously was treason to the king, but what could the king do Sir Hemmers army was twice as big as the Kings army. When Sir Hemmer attacked the capital city it so happened that I was in the city visiting the governor with my mom, and Sir Hemmer ended up killing my mom and he branded me with the scar I have now. But the scar was altered because I was struggling so much.
It ended up that a few still loyal knight to the king that were in Sir Hemmers army were my escorts to the gallows and they ended up giving me a horse and my Fathers sword along with a shield that had the mark of my scar in it. They sent me off end then they told there new king that a band of thieves attacked them and took the boys and killed him on the spot, then through the body away.
Now
I ended up on the path to the country that I would end up being king of
one day. When I got there a few guards that used to be my fathers
knights recognized the sword and noticed that, I was the son of the
king. They took me to the King and Queen and showed them the sword and
the king and queen took me in as there son I ended up being the heir to
the thrown of Breandyhiner because they had no children before the king
died. Now seven years later, I became king and that is when I started to think about Ereberlandil. I decided since I was the rightful heir to the thrown of Ereberlandil I was going to attack the main city that Sir Hemmer lived in, so I got an army of 1,239,786 people exactly and I attacked the first city which surrendered when they saw my army approaching. Now that went on for about ten towns until I got to the capital they stood there and fought. They were doing pretty well until the other half of my army got there then they surrendered and all joined my army in the end I went like that until I hit all the cities. But when I got to the castle of Sir Hemmer I was amazed at how big it was.
Now I fought them for ten strait months until we finally got into the city itself. Now your thinking did your army lose like all of it is men but you have to think Sir Hemmer has an army of 2,991,002 which is more than I started out with. I ended up getting about the same number of men. So now, it was time to make an attempted to get the king, I new the castle like the back of my hand because I played there as kid before Sir Hemmer betrayed my father. So I devised a plan to get into the castle and then to the king and kill him to take rightful claim over the country. Now after I got into the thrown room, which by the way is a big thrown room, I hid in a secret passage with ten of my best men to help me assassinate the King. When the King got there it only was a matter of time until he either found us or he was alone. Being alone came first. Then I told my men stay here and I will try to kill him alone if I am k9illed come out and kill him your selves and then you know who will become king. Now I got out of the passage way and I came behind the King and he heard me and turned around.
Then he said it is you the little brat I thought I had killed so long ago. The he pulled a sword out and we began the sword fight of a lifetime no other sword fight would test our skills than this one and second prize was death. With a clang and a swoosh went both our sword my men came out of there hiding place and watched us for hours every thing seemed to disappear accepted my opponent then I screamed with pain as he chopped my finger off.
I fell to the ground dropping my sword he raised his to make one final blow, but with the last of my strength I kicked him down. Then pulled a dagger out of its sheath that had been hidden and I stabbed him once for every time he had mocked my Mother and Father during the fight. Then ten times for each life, he took. I had memorized exactly how many people had died because of him and it came down to a total of 1,234,890 stabs that he received and by the time I was done he was dead.
It is now exactly one year later, the kingdom is on its way to being restored to its full Beauty. And that bring us here. In one hour, I am taking an oath of loyalty to the Kingdom and to do the best that I can for the Kingdom. Soon very soon, I will be the king of both Breandyhiner and Ereberlandil.
My King, said the maid that had just walked into the room.
Yes? I asked
I smiled and said I will be down shortly. I took one good look at myself and then I headed off to destiny.
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